Apartment Building

[i_petar]

Hi, it's my first post.

C&C are welcome.

[anindia]

dear petar,

ur effort was nice but u could not achieve the desired level. put some more stress in texturing, and lighting too. color selection is nice. i think some more darker shadows will bring more depth in the image.

something i should say about ur trees. as much as i understand u paste some trees with their respective alpha maps in the scene and then render it. u took 2 planes perpendiculu to each other and render as tree. this is not a bright way my friend. why don't u do these type of jobs in post production only- unless u have a very high quality tree model or texture. some of ur trees really destoy the dramma of the scene.

wait for other member's comments. u will find many more valuable crits here. which will help u a lot in next productions.

as a 1st try this was ok.

[IC]

Are you new to rendering or just new to the forum?

If you are a novice, this is a great start.

Post your software, experience etc and you'll get good advice here.

 

It does need work on textures and lighting but everything else is of quite a good standard.

You've obviously put a lot of work into the scene so keep working on the lighting and it'll turn out great.

[NOOXY]

i must agree this looks like u've put a lot into the scene and overall it's not a bad view..i would however work on textures and lighting but post software to get more accurate c&c...