hotel night and day

[Lincoln Brown]

hi, i could use some critique on these images, especially the nighttime... its my first night render, and i'm kind of at a loss how to improve it.

 

in the night shot i'd like to add action on the road, with blurred moving cars... anyone have suggestions how to achieve this in 2d or 3d?

 

thanks!

 

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[STRAT]

the second image is MUCH better than the first.

 

night times are hard to master. i'd certainly drop those black peeps, and model some interior walls to the rooms - they dont look like rooms with lights on, they look like self illumed bits of the fascade.

 

also, straighten out all those horrible sloping verticles in both shots.

 

nice starting progress