NGon House

[deddyronaldo]

First time post here!

my last work, done with 3dsmax6+vray n still WIP

need advice please! thanks n best regards to all

[kulbir bal]

as per this size everything is fine........... it will be good if you can send bigger pic

[Kurt]

Very nice rendering, and an interesting room!

 

I have only two minor comments on the composition:

 

- Tilting the camera can add a very interesting touch to a composition, however, I am not sure if this is the case here. Or maybe its just tilted a little to much.

- The big plant in the foreground to the left is covering a part of the interior design which I personally would like to see more of, to understand what kind of space and interior is covered behind it. I think the pot/jar is oversized.

[bigroo]

Composition is making me seasick! I keep tilting me head a little too much & then back again to see if I'm mising something. It detracts from the bigger picture. Maybe try altering the angle some.

[deddyronaldo]

Thanks all

other view but the brickstone not fix yet, weird tilling^^ n some texture need to improve.

cnc are welcome, thanks n best regards to all

[deddyronaldo]

@ Kulbir bal

Bigger pic? maybe i'll do it if i hv done this work completely, thanks

 

@ Kurt

Yeah i think same too, the pot oversized, thanks

 

@ Bigroo

Oopps sorry...^^ i hv posting with 'normal cam'.

thanks

[Justin Hunt]

I'd rethink the fluro light fittings, they are too officy for a home.

 

jhv

[deddyronaldo]

@ Hunt

hmm...what should i do for fix it? give me clue please!

thanks.