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[skala67]

a small doctor's office in Southern AZ... Still needs signage and outdoor light fixtures, but this is the general idea. I will be fixing the pavement repetition and the rock landscape tiling for the final. oh and I just noticed some artifacting I forgot to touch up on the Left side of the building...oops

 

C&C welcome....second view to come shortly

 

(Cinema4D)

 

cheers,

[Ernest Burden III]

Nicely done! The foreground car makes the picture. But speaking of cars...the biggest expanse of glass is to see a Mercedes? Move the central car to the space beyond the bushes, (to the right in this view) and reposition the red truck so that it takes up the same area of the right, but doesn't reflect in the big window--do that by moving it forward about one length and then to the right until its about like it is now.

 

Also, the curb feel too tall. Even if they are accurate, try making them shorter

 

And can you soften the trees some? They are distractingly sharp.

 

Make the sunlight warmer and the shadows a bit purple to match your background plate.

 

Is the glass mirror? Wouldn't you see a hint of what's inside with sun shining on it? If not, or if you would rather not get that involved, try opening the door, have that person you show walking in.