interiors not good enough

[arctura17]

need c & c to improve my work both in texturing, rendering and compositing:)

[FlytE]

I think you are being a little hard on yourself... that image is very nice. I personally would like to see the sunspot on the floor quite bright, and your lamp turned off.... plus maybe somethign on your laptop screen.

 

Very nice though!

[arctura17]

thanks flyte for the constructive critism, will do your comments.

for a newbie like me, it would be great to have comments to further improve my skill.

 

thank a alot.... :)

[Matt McDonald]

I thing its a pretty nice image. I really like the the shadows and sense of space on the left bottom portion of the image.

 

The laptop looks kind of off, I want to say that it looks "flat" but then again it is flat

 

I think some reflections on the floor would help out quite a bit.

 

The camera angle is nice and dynamic, its a small room and I think that you've done a good job capturing it.

[NOOXY]

that's a great image so far man...nice camera angle. I would turn up the sun brightness a tad bbit too...can't wait to see the finished image.

[Fran]

Hi Michael,

 

You don't have far to go. Just a little more attention to detail - the pillows in the foreground are away from the wall.

 

The main thing is the jpeg compression of your image. Be sure and render to a lossless image format like tga, png, or tif. I have found that Photoshop doesn't have a very good quality/size output with jpeg. There are several good image viewers that have really good jpeg conversion.