Woody Posted July 21, 2006 Share Posted July 21, 2006 Hi All, Please can you give me some constructive criticism about the attached image. Personally the composition doesn't seem quite right but I can't put me finger on it. Don't hold back I won't be offended! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
taprice Posted July 21, 2006 Share Posted July 21, 2006 Nice image. Maybe a chair or couch and background image for outside. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cdos00 Posted July 21, 2006 Share Posted July 21, 2006 I agree. The composition is lacking. I believe the image has no TRUE point of interest. Nothing is quite "defined" enough as the point of interest of the rendering. I believe if you put a table and chairs in front of the window you could create an interest in the scene. Secondly the curtains seem to be blocking out light from the window. The penetrating light is very chopped up and doesn't quite achieve it's goal of giving depth to the interior space. If you worked on the translucency of the curtains and had a table for that light to fall on (and flow over) I believe you would significantly increase the point of interest. Just my two cents. I think your lighting setup and your texturing are VERY NICE! Good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arquiteck09 Posted July 21, 2006 Share Posted July 21, 2006 i know this kind of wall have that style, but your pattern looks too repetitive, maybe if you change the size a little bit,and try to put a shiny background, with that courtain you can get a more rich view. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Woody Posted July 22, 2006 Author Share Posted July 22, 2006 Thanks for your input chaps, there's definitely a few points I am going to take a look at thanks to your comments. I'll post it again once its finished. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3D_IC Posted July 24, 2006 Share Posted July 24, 2006 awww my god!!! only joking! those curtains make me want to see outside. Maybe open one of the windows and play with the gap between the curtains so you can see out a bit. As if the wind had blown them open for a split second. Maybe a pic of a nice garden or greenery, because the room looks like it belongs in a nice big estate (not council estate) house. Also i noticed the plant pot on the table to the left seems to be glowing a bit. Not that i could do any better, just telling ya what stood out to me. looking good though man! keep it up fella. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
3D_IC Posted July 24, 2006 Share Posted July 24, 2006 i knew something was bugging me. Tassles on the rug!!! rugs in houses like this with that period of furniture always have tassles.....or is it just me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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