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[NOOXY]

Here's some more work using finalrender for cinema4d...need c&c for improvements...

[frank1331]

Model looks good NOOXY. IMHO, the thing that makes it look a little off is the lighting. I'm not really sure what is happening. Either its becoming dusk outside and you have a real bright light around the corner that we cannot see, or there is some huge floating mass blocking out the rest of the sun outside the deck. If this is a daytime rendering, then I would brighten up the area outside the room on the deck. If its a duck/nighttime renderng then I would turn on the lighting over the table.

 

Also noticed one other thing, I would apply some type of falloff to the reflection of the door in the TV cabinet.

[reseb]

hello:)

I think the balcony is too dark, maybe little less reflection on the ground and more blur to the reflection.

one detail, the tv is white?

I really like Final render!

continue it's good!

@+

Seb

[NOOXY]

THANKS ALL .i'll see how i can improve but like i said its a work in progress and i'm just learning the finalrender engine.so hope i can get some tutorials and tips on it cause the manuals only have enough to get you started...

[NOOXY]

HERE'S my update guys getting there slowly but surely an dlearning alot along the way...so tell me what uall think..the 2 white square boxes on the side of the staircase are planters i plan on putting in post effect but just wanted to work on my lighting.

 

using c4d 9.6 with finalrender...45 mins rendertime....

[STRAT]

the external balcony in front of you is still way too dark.

[Buffalo Bills]

Nooxy,

 

Looking better. Much improved from the last image. I think you still need to work on the lighting. The balcony, like Strat said, is still too dark. I think with the bouncing of light off the tiles on the balcony would give you the similiar look as the right side of your image with the light coming into the window. Plus another thing that might help is to adjust the colors, brightness and contrast of the background. It will help get you closer to make it feel like it is part of the image. Right now I think it is too dark.

[blade911]

hey nooxy

 

i agree with strat. ur balcony has to be much brighter. the area around ur tv looks fine. same intensity required everywhere else i guess esp since u have nice wide openins

 

y don u give us a diff cam angle too

 

good work man

 

cheers

[Jason Matthews]

Reduce the reflection on the stairs and maybe the floors. Are they really that glossy? Balcony is still too dark and needs contrast. Material for the pedistals?

 

Overall I like it though. Can't wait to see the final.