urgent please

[ahmed mansy]

hi guys

 

that's a residential building.the design is finished and i have to finish visualisation by sunday as a dead line so i really need to know ur comments about materials+light and all that and if there is a problem how would i fix it

 

by the way I used v-ray + vray sun as a light

Thanks

[STRAT]

ok

 

first off the lighting is too dull and flat. needs to be more contrasty, brighter and 'zingy'.

 

second, too much foliage imo. looks more like a building placed in a jungle rather than an urban area. it's too distracting. especially with those overhanging trees either side - looks like a clearing in a forest glade.

 

glass - needs better contrasted reflections.

 

people - look like giants!!! thin them out (dont need so many) and scale them properly. that goes for the cars too.

 

the cars needn't really be there either. also, the cars and people and foliage lighting is all wrong for the image.

 

compositionally i'd like the camera too move back a bit so we catch more and aren't on top of it.

 

these are small points, but need to be addressed in my opinion.

 

comming on good so far though m8.

[ahmed mansy]

Thanks for replying. u were right about all that but how would i fix light and what does zingy mean??