commercial kitchen/breakroom

[richmondlu]

Maya 7.0/photoshop

 

 

Looking for feedback.

[ebad]

Hey very good!!

What renderer do you use in maya?

I think the lights on wall are too heavy.What do you think?

[NOOXY]

NICE IMAGE man but i will tone down the lights on the ceiling.what light source is causing it to burnout with light like that...modelling and texturing is good..keep it up..

[Ernest Burden III]

Looking for feedback.

 

The lighting leads the eye up to the ceiling. It would be better to lower that brightness and add some spots on the table, even better to darken the foreground bits of furniture to better focus attention to the center.

 

And its awfully yellow--is the design that uniform? Perhaps you could make the chairs a different color, or add some objects of a complimentary color?

[richmondlu]

Well alot of the lighting is due to the client wants a bright summer feeling to it so that is why the yellow, but yes i agree with you on the ceiling very burnt out that is one thing i knew i would have to fix. Other then that i am waiting on the interior designer to throw me a new color scheme. i will update you all on that.

 

Thanks for the quick replys and the constructive critisism. Its hard to do things on your own after you look at it so long you become imune.

 

Maya 7.0

M/Ray

 

 

Thanks again,

[Geoffc]

Something seems wrong either with the flooring or cabs where they run together, right next to the frig.