Thiago de Andrade Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 I'm finishing this image, a rush job, 2 days working on it. I'd like your appreciation on this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ricardo Eloy Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 Hi, Thiago! Good pic. A couple comments, though: - the glass looks a bit odd. We can't see refractio, and it makes it look more like acrilic (if it is acrilic, then nevermind) - the lighting, although well done, lacks contrast. I mean, the sky is not strong enough to light he entire room, yet the artificial lights don't seem to work either. I don't know if I'm being picky or whatever, but I guess I'd like to see something more defined, if you know what I mean. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 not a bad image especially for a rushed job..glass looks a bit odd too probably to much reflection or something texturing and lighting looks good..camera angle seems to be stretchingthe room a bit...keep on posting:cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jefferson Grigsby Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 first thing that jumps out is that the image is a tad dark and the shadow under the chair could use more of an area shadow, seems too crisp. Also, I see a horizon refelxtion in the glass panel behind the chair. Maybe you could vary this up some, so it does not appear to be a house in the middle of a field. Also, maybe you could turn on the light above the table, seems like an oppurtunity to bring more light and warmth into the image. I would also reprimand the builder for pulling the formwork away from the cast in place panel too soon.(hehe) You aso may want to introduce a bit of a gap under the cast in place panel. it would be hung and not just sitting on top of the floor material Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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