UTI Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 This is my 1st test render ..........tell me wt do u think and wt to fix. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 i love your image man..good job on modelling and rendering..your lighting seems to match the foggy background and the atmosphere seems a lil bit gloomy but otherwise nice...great use of archmotion models too....some details on software will help for c&c... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianKitts Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 your density/gamma is off, take it into photoshop and tweak it a bit.... either in the exposure/gamma panel, or just in brightness and contrast drop your brightness a bit and bump up your contrast. The image is gonna be a little too dark, but it will get rid of the white haze over your whole image. (see attached) I would just play with your lights in the scene a little bit more before rendering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
diegofer_9 Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 It's a nice rendeing, but the camera angle seems to high, or the ceiling seems too low. Unless the ceiling actually IS very low. I agree with increasing the contrast in photoshop. Good work. D. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jafs00 Posted August 16, 2006 Share Posted August 16, 2006 I think the image is great, the modeling is superb...the only problem I see is with the carpet...looks flat, try bumping it up, and getting a better image for it's texture. All and all it's very good. Keep posting more great work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UTI Posted August 17, 2006 Author Share Posted August 17, 2006 Thanx alot for your nice comments ............. Brian ,u have been a great help....next time i will tweak it in photoshop . Diego u r right the celing is very low i discovered this yesterday it should have been higher 50 cm. and finally julio ...i will bumb the carpet it really looks falt .. finally thanx again for comments .....i will complete the whole scene coz this was part of it and will post it again with adjustments i will ask for your comments again , so be ready Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mahorela Posted August 17, 2006 Share Posted August 17, 2006 Looks good to me for your first test render. I am going to go one step further on the rug and say that bump or not it looks a little lo res to me. I think you have a hotspot on the top left ceiling that is a little distracting and overall I think that the space seems a little crowded. I wouldn't know where to walk out if I were standing in that room, but maybe thats the angle. in any case look forward to seeing the final, great detail as well by the way Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UTI Posted August 19, 2006 Author Share Posted August 19, 2006 Looks good to me for your first test render. I am going to go one step further on the rug and say that bump or not it looks a little lo res to me. I think you have a hotspot on the top left ceiling that is a little distracting and overall I think that the space seems a little crowded. I wouldn't know where to walk out if I were standing in that room, but maybe thats the angle. in any case look forward to seeing the final, great detail as well by the way 1st of all thanx for ur comments .......... about the carpet it low res and that's the only library that i have. the hot spot in top left corner is because there are 2 windows in the left wall . the crowded is because of the camera angle. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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