high rise : require help

[kippu]

i need your help guys in finishing this ...i really dont know wat to fix

 

 

thanks

[hdehondt]

Hello,

 

To much reflection ? It's like you can see straight through the building. Clouds and buldings in the reflection almost match the background.

 

The building isn't standing up straight either. It's falling to the right.

 

But to be honest...(except the 2 things above) I like it !

 

Hans

[anindia]

hi prem, its a good wor. only thing i feel. u can add window mullion lines to the mass at the back. i think a no. of structural glazing types are available. its mt personal feel that if u use vertical lines it will loo better(because already u have 2 layered vertical glazing bands. ur background and lighting is good. but the building needs some more details.

[Ky Lane]

Personally? It needs perspective. Its a humungus building, but the top is as wide as the bottom, despite bieng 20 floors up. From you camera lense back to 25mm and move it towards the subject.....much more dramatic.

[notamondayfan]

also, the building doesnt have anything really in the foreground to give any sort of scale to it. you have all those skyscrapers in the background, then a forest infront of the city, then your building. fair play if its actually like that, but i think u need to add some more depth to the whole scene