kulbir bal Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 my new work in progres ready to show to client but i like to show u first for suggestions http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=vikramemail_1.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 first off, drop the car completely - the image will look 100% better. the image is also too bright/glarey and contrasty. make it easier on the eyes. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
supaslims Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 Absolutely, get rid of that car completely! Nice modeling but i would have a look at the driveway, that angle looks realy nasty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kulbir bal Posted July 29, 2003 Author Share Posted July 29, 2003 Dear Mr.Stephen, hi and thanks for ur valuable suggestions, after aplying ur suggestions i found my rendering better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kulbir bal Posted July 29, 2003 Author Share Posted July 29, 2003 Dear Mr.Mathew, hi, i have romoved the car but i am unable to anything with driveway becuse its according to architect's specifications. thanks for ur valuable suggestions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kulbir bal Posted July 29, 2003 Author Share Posted July 29, 2003 Dear Mr.Mathew, hi, i have romoved the car but i am unable to anything with driveway becuse its according to architect's specifications. thanks for ur valuable suggestions Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
taufux Posted July 29, 2003 Share Posted July 29, 2003 alo erm ya i agree with the other, the car is out of scale and how about the white walls add some bump or noise for it cos it looks a bit of too flat! and last thing, the camera angle is a bit out!! :angeuhoh: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted July 30, 2003 Share Posted July 30, 2003 any updates to show us? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Richard McCarthy Posted July 30, 2003 Share Posted July 30, 2003 Actually, I like the car nice car... But the problem with it is that, it's BLOCKING the view that you are trying to portray to your viewer, get rid of it Yeh, I agree that it's quite a bit too much contrast, probably also stem from the fact that you didn't use any GI/Radiosity (or did you??) -RM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ernest Burden III Posted July 30, 2003 Share Posted July 30, 2003 Absolutely, get rid of that car completely...but i would have a look at the driveway, that angle looks realy nasty. Right--that car would lose its lower front panel trying to drive in. So if you must show a car, better make it a Jeep. The view is awful. Try to either get INSIDE the paranoid wall so you see the house, or, if you must be outside the property get much farther back. As it is the wall has such an acute perspective that it takes over the view. Move back, flatten out the perspective. Also, the bits framing the property need to work better with the subject. Now the whole thing looks too much like a collage. Perhaps also try a higher view--up at the level of the balcony or just above the eave line. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
John Dollus Posted August 2, 2003 Share Posted August 2, 2003 I would go with Ernest's suggestion of a higher view. It would minimize the paranoid wall and make the courtyard appear larger. Also, the roof seems too saturated to me. I would make the palm trunks light brown instead of gray and add some low lying growies around the front of the house. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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