Jonny English Posted September 8, 2003 Share Posted September 8, 2003 Hi Everyone I'm a new Max User and this is my first piece of work - it is done soley in 3DS Max 5.1 and took about 3 days to complete. It's not quite finished but I would welcome all your comments. (The Design is by 'Architects Ink') http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=House_800.jpg Jonny English Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kulbir bal Posted September 9, 2003 Share Posted September 9, 2003 should have enviroment and glass is not ok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
illyrianeye Posted September 9, 2003 Share Posted September 9, 2003 1. fix the stair, the orange material doesnt look mapped or real. 2. add a sky or background 3. add a foreground if possible otherwise, the house looks good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
illyrianeye Posted September 9, 2003 Share Posted September 9, 2003 oops i take the add sky back, you have a sky, just add a realistic horizon line or ground plane Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
diablo Posted September 9, 2003 Share Posted September 9, 2003 What kind of material are you using in the roof?it's too reflective Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny English Posted September 18, 2003 Author Share Posted September 18, 2003 Hi guys, I have been doing a bit more work on my image and would be grateful for all your comments... http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=House_A_800.jpg Jonny English. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
diablo Posted September 19, 2003 Share Posted September 19, 2003 hi, relly nice the rendering looks so diferent, the only thing I can see are the right trees and the sky are dark(maybe is my screen). Congartulations and good luck Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbr Posted September 19, 2003 Share Posted September 19, 2003 Really nice! I agree about the trees on the right - too dark. Maybe just collage another tree on top of them (for an easy fix). The yard and driveway look really nice - almost too nice The house looks impeccable, but the yard and driveway look a little aged (just a little). That's really nit picking, though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny English Posted September 19, 2003 Author Share Posted September 19, 2003 The 3D model is the house....the sky, trees, grss and driveway are from a photo of the built house in. I did it as an exercise to see how 'real' I could make my render. I will post the original image so that you can compare. Jonny English. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jonny English Posted September 19, 2003 Author Share Posted September 19, 2003 Here is the original photo that I used for a comparison. This is the real-life building. http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=OriginalPhoto.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
diablo Posted September 19, 2003 Share Posted September 19, 2003 it's nice,,,the only thing I can see is: you forgot some roof lights and the garage door is deeper.. but it's really good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TAKA Posted September 20, 2003 Share Posted September 20, 2003 hehe...hey jonny, funny thing, your render looks much better than the original photo!! nice work, but like the rest i suggest u lighten the sky. It doesn't match your light conditions (in your render) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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