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Guest imanobody

I think the top part looks good, but the bottom needs much more detail added to it and the glass should be slightly transparent (only a very little bit) so it doesn't look like a mirror.

 

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Guest imanobody

I actually like the angle - it gives it a sense of scale and is dramatic. I would understand why this would NOT be a good angle for a client, but if it's only for an exhibition, then I think it looks fine. But it might be wise to put in a real sky above the building with clouds and all, so it doesn't look so plain (the sky). Maybe add a hint of fog, but not so much that it looks like smog or a fogy day. A little volumn goes a long way in giving something scale.

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