Guest's villa in the Egyptian embassy

[ahmed mansy]

hi

 

these r 2 shots of the guest's villa (which was part of our semester project) i just concentrated on that part and made the visualisation.

 

i would be appreciated to know ur comments about it

 

Thanks

[Justin Hunt]

Firstly, lower the viewpoint, its distorting the scale and not flattering. Use the water as a framing element.

 

The lighting is too harsh of the skys used

 

The fountain splash is off centre to the fountain

 

Good modeling, with better lighting this will be enhanced greatly

 

Hope I don't sound too harsh

 

JHV

[Thiago de Andrade]

The first image has a strange background that doesn't seem to fit. Look the illumination on the water fountain. It's sun lit.

 

But Justin said it all. Follow his advices.

[Bugga_Guy]

Not bad however a few things - In the first rendering, the water from the fountain is too tall and its floating! Get rid of that stormy background - makes the image look scary

 

In the second image (again the water fountain is floating) that lamp at the top left is odd its floating - looks out of scale. Either cheat the pole in more or get rid of it

[mmundy]

Beautiful model... only the RPC's detract from it.

 

Try getting some 3d image-mapped people, or RPC's that are not Federal Agents in dark suits. You can get some of thes for free on-line. Try www.got3d.com or www.lowpoly.com