Give me your advice

[little architect]

Hello all ....

 

I want your advice and instructions concerning my work using 3D max and photoshop ,I'm just a begginer and i want to improve the quality of my work.so, i would be greatful if you sent me your openions .

( I don't want anybody to say this good for a begginer but also don't be tough)

 

Regards,

walaa

[neko]

i actually like your attempt to focus on the architecture and not the entourage (people). however, the shadows of the people are distracting because they don't follow the massing of the building and seem out of place in such a dark environment (maybe remove them).

 

night shots are far more difficult than daytime images - i find the images a bit flat and hard to understand massing, materials, light and shadows (all the things that make great architecture....and images).

 

nice effort though

 

cheers

[Thiago de Andrade]

I don't think you were after a photo real rendering there... i think tweaking the levels in photoshop, or any other bitmap software, would do some good.

[Geoffc]

I think for a useful critique, you need to supply your design or presentation intent of these images.

[IC]

I think the difficulty level and style of render you are trying to achieve is beyond your current abilities.

Try some basic stuff first and get a feel for relaying the design effectively without any frills. Your own style will come through over time.