Vince_1972 Posted October 7, 2003 Share Posted October 7, 2003 hello it's my first post hier. i post a little wip, C&C welcom good journey Vince PS : made by Architectural desktop, Max5 and VRay Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
schmoron13 Posted October 7, 2003 Share Posted October 7, 2003 Hi Vince, ok, both WOW and ewwwwww first off, I love the composition. From the tree to the skylights, it just appeals to me. It also reminds me of every commercial office space in the bay area, specifically, the east bay. I love the frosted glas (very EHDD). The plants look ultra realistic while not looking awkward next to the structure. now for the bad. First off, I know you did this as a wip, but it's hard to tell details with your AA set to "fixed rate." The Mies chairs don't do it for me. They seem out of place, not aesthetically, but architectually. I'd do something about the people. THey look flat. The concrete planter (in the foreground) looks a little strange in terms of mapping. I know I love the plants, but lookingat it know, some of those look a little plastic. Maybe you could add some transparancy to them? I HATE the "ceiling" material on the walkways. It just looks wierd to me (like cupboard lining). Lastly, is that a wood surface on the floor? If it is, I'd lose it...it doesn't make sense. ONce again, I love this composition. It's got definite promise to be spectacular... btw, I lived in Basel for 3 years while my parents were doing their post-doc's...though I've forgotten EVERY word of swicherdeutch (spelling?)... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fernando Lino Posted October 7, 2003 Share Posted October 7, 2003 I like the rendering but the Skylight doesn't look real..and the background too, there are soo many lines on the frames. I agree with the previous commentary about the people!!! where did you get these plants? I like them Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vince_1972 Posted October 8, 2003 Author Share Posted October 8, 2003 hello, thaks for reply The AA is very bad, sorry orangeshy the next one will be better. For the others notice, I will see this that I can do. I do not speak well swicherdeutch. The tree comes from with www.bionatics.com. Sorry for my English orangeshy Best regards Vince Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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