spanish pants Posted September 9, 2006 Share Posted September 9, 2006 Hello everyone, This is my first wip post in a long time, and i'm looking for your much needed expertise. Anything you can point out to help turn what is essentially a boring model/shot into something decent would be great. It was modeled in XSI and rendered with mental ray, using global illumination and final gathering. Lot's of incredible work and i'm hoping that with the critiques, some of the talent will rub off on me. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spanish pants Posted September 11, 2006 Author Share Posted September 11, 2006 anyone? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ricardo Eloy Posted September 12, 2006 Share Posted September 12, 2006 Nothing much to crit here, amigo. The only thing I can think of is the framing of the second pic. It would be really nice if you could add a neighborhood so we can actually see the place, not only the building (a big part of a good pic is not about the building, but the surroundings). Besides that, good job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spanish pants Posted September 12, 2006 Author Share Posted September 12, 2006 Thanks for the comments Rick. I need to go out and shoot some BG plates for this and change the camera. Is there anthing you can suggest? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IC Posted September 12, 2006 Share Posted September 12, 2006 I like it. Nice feel overall but I don't think the car does it any favours. Just pull the camera back and get some of the neighbouring houses (photographed) in. Oh and great user name! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spanish pants Posted September 12, 2006 Author Share Posted September 12, 2006 I like it. Nice feel overall but I don't think the car does it any favours. Just pull the camera back and get some of the neighbouring houses (photographed) in. Oh and great user name! Thanks for the critique IC. It is a rather bland shot the way it is. I'm going out tomorrow with the camera to shoot some buildings. But instead of comping the render onto the BG plate i'll just map the buildings onto simple geometry in the scene. I can never seem to integrate my renders into fotos and have them look natural. p.s. I don't think a Berlingo does anyone any favours, jajaja. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spanish pants Posted September 29, 2006 Author Share Posted September 29, 2006 Ok, here it is again. This time with the surrounding buildings. Let me know what you think. Cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IC Posted October 2, 2006 Share Posted October 2, 2006 Looks great. A bigger image would help to judge the quality. Girls look a bit small but again, it's hard to tell at that resolution. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
spanish pants Posted October 2, 2006 Author Share Posted October 2, 2006 Thanks Iain, the girls happened to walk into the shot as i took the picture for the bg plate. I thought about deleting them but they were sort of cute, hehehe. I´ll try to post as big an image as i can for further comment. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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