Mixed use building(3d Studio viz R3)

[ssstrutz]

Hello all,

Well I am still living in the old days and have yet to upgrade from 3d studio viz R3. I have just gotten back into modeling and was looking for any comments regarding the latest rendering I did in viz 3 and post in photoshop. All C+C will be greatly appreciated.

Thanks,

Scott

[jophus14]

Nice model. The vehicles look huge and the blue outline around the trees needs some attention. After a little cleaning up this will look great

[frank1331]

I agree, I think the car at the far right needs some work, and the truck is out of scale. I know it's kind of tough when you already have a car in the photo to get the added cars to look right. Also the girl at the the corner is a little distracting to me. (IMHO) Also I'm not sure which way the sunlight is coming from, so it's tough to judge if the shadows you have are correct. Judgeing from the way the medium sized trees at the corner and at the left end of the building, plus the bloom feature in the glass and bumper of the minivan, it's coming from the right to the left. But some of the shadows on the building appear to go from front to back. Just make sure you check that. Also missing the shadow on the street sign at the corner

 

Just clean up a few things and it will look great.

[ssstrutz]

Thanks all for the comments. I agree with everything you both said. I have made the adjustments and can see a difference.

Thanks for taking the time to help my project be better,

Scott