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Looks great! My comments would be that you should vary the scale of the bikes, and vary their colors as well. They look too perfect - too CG.

 

When you do your final post processing, you should mirror the text on one of the beams on the ceiling, as they're currently mirrors of each other.

 

The lighting on the close displays looks better than the original - but I think it could still use more punch. Try to find some IES spots and really hit the bikes with some wattage. It looks like maybe you have some little fixture lights under the top surface of the red fixtures, but they're not on I don't think.

 

NEED MORE LIGHT!!! :) Show off them cycles.

 

My brother-in-law is insanely into cycling - we're building racing cycles to sell on ebay. He's always telling me about how crazy cyclists are about logos. I only see one in your image. Are you allowed to use more?

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  • 2 weeks later...

very nice.

I would not vary the colors of the bike frames - most "serious" manufacturers only have 1 or 2 colors for each model, and furthermore I think it creates less focus on "is the frame really that color?"

question: is the background modeled, or a photo?

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