WIP Adult Clinic Bldg

[Jorbu]

This is a project I'm close to finishing and would like to hear your comments and criticism before I print the image and present it to the client.

 

I haven't had much time to work on this, as it is a very low budget project. The building is a clinic for mentally ill adults and the client is a non profit agency.

 

It was modeled in ACAD and rendered in Lightscape

 

Thanks in advance for your input.

 

Jorge

 

http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=clinic.jpg

[Sawyer]

Jorbu,

 

Try to desaturate the colors a little. The look right now is kind of sharp.

 

Make sure your camera is level. The view looks a little a skew.

 

And then crop. There is way too much parking lot. Maybe place the car in a parking stall not at foreground corner.

 

That would help.

[Ricardo Eloy]

Hey, Jorbu!

Only 2 words: the grass. Work on the grass! Besides that (and what Sawyer said), you're in the right direction.

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Rick

[nisus]

tiling: roof and street

 

nisus

[Paul Griger]

overall looking good.

 

As already said, just work on the tiling for the grass, roof, and pavement and you'll be good!

[Jorbu]

Thanks a lot for your comments and input. I'll try to make all the recommended changes (time and budget allowed...of course), and will post an update.

 

Jorge