muzzy Posted September 1, 2003 Share Posted September 1, 2003 This is my first time to enter to challenge. Rendered in 3ds max, background and some details in adobe. Here is my work. I would really appreciate some feedback, critique on my render.. [ September 01, 2003, 09:26 AM: Message edited by: muzzy ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jeff Mottle Posted September 1, 2003 Share Posted September 1, 2003 Hi Muzzy, Looks like a great start but you may want to re-read the challenge rules. It's a detail challenge and the architectural genre must be Adobe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muzzy Posted September 1, 2003 Author Share Posted September 1, 2003 Thanks but still I really appreciated feedbacks to my render. I will detail some close ups with Adobe. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lanni Posted September 1, 2003 Share Posted September 1, 2003 Hi muzzy, I agree with Jeff in re-reading the challage rules. I don't get too much of an adobe feeling from your rendering. As for quality of the rendering (modeling, texturing, lighting, etc...) you need more detail, edges are too sharp trying rounding them off. shadow edges are too crisp they need to be softened and lightened, your texturing feels too flat use some bump. your wood grain needs some uvw mapping and that background image needs to be alot better quality, it's too pixelated. well I hope this info helps, keep working on it and post your updates. if you run into problems with modeling, texturing, etc... be sure to ask for help but try to be as specific as you can. also can you post a wireframe? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tony Posted September 1, 2003 Share Posted September 1, 2003 I think he is misunderstanding what adobe is. Adobe in this challenge means an architectural style, not the program adobe photoshop to add details to the render. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
muzzy Posted September 1, 2003 Author Share Posted September 1, 2003 My poor english sometimes puts me in trouble. :ebiggrin: I totaly misunderstood this challenge.Thank you Tony. On the other hand, this project is a referance image from an old Turkish village called "CUMALIKIZIK" It is an adobe building but different style... I will try to improve my rendering along the critics and improve details. I will work on this along Lanni's suggestions. Lanni, here is the link for wireframe. http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=wire_3.jpg I hope this helps your question. Thanks all of you for willing to help me. [ September 01, 2003, 11:19 PM: Message edited by: muzzy ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Register a new accountSign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now