Paging Dr. Octagon....

[skala67]

....(some of you may know what album that is from )

 

anyways, here is a WIP of an emergency department lobby area at a new local hospital. Still have more to do, like adding landscape and furniture to the outside area beyond the glass, along with some additional work in the interior, but thought it was a good point to get some C&C. So fire up those comments.

 

 

cheers,

[Sindala]

Just got back from holiday, that's a good album to start the week with!

 

almost there i think,

 

If a may make a list:

-the ceiling looks very white to me.

-some tile lines on the floor

-the hanging lamps are a good idea, but now they look more like upsidedown eggs.

-some more detail in the room dividors?

- the top edge of the right roomdivider is alighned with the ceiling beyond!

- frontsite of the wooden ceiling texture rotated?

- the windows look like they have no glass in them, maybe add a little line of the edge of the glass.

 

 

cheers,

 

halfschark-aligator-halfman!

[Camby1298]

Fine start thus far. I agree with Sindala about the windows, they play a big part in this interior shot, they look too thin and maybe add a bit more reflectivity in them. When you add the landscape in the common area they will disappear all together if you keep them as they are.