RESIDENTIAL-EXTERIOR

[radioVOY]

HI THIS IS A NEW WORK THAT I'M TRYING TO FINISH, I WORK A LOT ON THE DESING BECAUSE IS A OLD HOUSE BUT WITH A NEW DESING, NOW I NEED TO GET MONEY FROM THE CLIENT, THE HARDEST PART!!

 

BUT I HOPE WITH THE RENDERS MY CLIENT DONT GIVE UP.

OPEN TO ALL YOUR SUGESTIONS!

REGARDS.

[IC]

Wow

That is one busy design! Very nice but I think the car would really struggle to get in there as drives are usually levelled off on a hill. Also,(imho) the fence just puts it a little over the edge, concept wise.

Is your direct light source maybe a bit too bright?

Otherwise it's a good render of an interesting design-I like it.

Iain

[radioVOY]

thanks a lot!

you're right there is some details to polish, about the extra lighting its a efect made with photoshop but may be i must lower the glow a bit.

 

regards.

[M.H.B]

hey there

 

very nice render man......this extra glow look pretty good to my..it´s just my opinion..i would not change that

[mbr]

It is a nice render. I agree about the car looking a little off, maybe the shadow below it is too dark?

 

The design was certainly taken too far. If you eliminate the crazy fence mesh with the exaggerated pole structure and the fron fence, it'd make a world better! I do like the soft blur that draws your eye to the large window in the center - it works well, but it's really having a hard time competing with the chaos.

[radioVOY]

thanks everyone for the reply's i apreciate your comments but the remain time that i have its just to polish the render so i can made desing changes.

once again the time its not by my side.