hooman_71 Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 hi everyone this is my recent project thanks for any c&c . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Thiago de Andrade Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 The sky doesn't appear to match the sunlight and atmosphere of the image. Also try modeling better the walkway and parking lot, with all the heights and accesses. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arqjuan Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 Hi hooman, I give you a little tip: never I mean never put people who is watching to the camera. Cheers JC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Andrew Roane Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 The building looks great. As stated before, the parking lot and that surrounding area needs some adjustment. The car image doesn't seem to fit at the angle it is shown, and slight motion blur in photoshop would help the people blend in a little better. Keep working on it and this will look great. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAYMOND Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 Hi hooman, I give you a little tip: never I mean never put people who is watching to the camera. Cheers JC why???? doesn't bother me.... maybe they are watching a plane come in... rather i would just have one people just for scale... rpc or whatever is always very destracting.. r:confused: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arqjuan Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 Hi Raymond, for me is look like the candid camera or he`s the protagonist who say (look at me i`m in the airport or whatever) or maybe is my personal opinion I always try to avoid this kind of poses . Thinking better is maybe that Ajroane says the car doesn´t fit and the focal point goes to that point where the people are looking the camera. PS. Hooman try to put some airport stuff (fill the sky) like a plane or those carry bag (sorry I don´t know how to call it). PS2. Sorry my engilsh is VEEEEEEEEERY BAD Cheers JC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RAYMOND Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 well ok, you have a point.... i just hate too much people prop... your english is fine.. better than most... of whom it is native.. would agree about the "lets communicate that this is an airport" idea ... planes, taxi cabs, luggage, stress... also, a tornato sky doesn't help either. maybe a plane falling out the sky with flames and smoke... (well no)... always something... r:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
arqjuan Posted October 3, 2006 Share Posted October 3, 2006 also, a tornato sky doesn't help either. maybe a plane falling out the sky with flames and smoke... (well no)... ROFLMAO Cheers JC Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hooman_71 Posted October 4, 2006 Author Share Posted October 4, 2006 thank u all for ur nice & helpful c&c . I'll send u the next image in a few days. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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