yosa_b Posted November 7, 2003 Share Posted November 7, 2003 hi guys, i am new to this, this is one of my new projects, done with max5 & finalrender, comments are welcomed to make this image look nicer, best regards. http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=yasser1_1.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DelfoZ Posted November 7, 2003 Share Posted November 7, 2003 thelight is just a little briggest in the floor. maybe u can remove thats 2 peoples. and some trees block the visibility Add some texture in the sidewalk and street. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joel_FVD Posted November 7, 2003 Share Posted November 7, 2003 I like it. I also agree about the floor, it's too bright. The street looks too clean. And finally, that car has to go. That's one of the first things i noticed. It's way too sporty. Either take it out completely or substitute onother that's more in theme with the location. Also, in my opinion, the car doesn't have to be completly in view, by doing so it distracts way too much from what is important, and that is the building. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
yosa_b Posted November 8, 2003 Author Share Posted November 8, 2003 thank you for your notes, i think your right, i didn't put much effort on the ground & the side walk, i will modify it & post it later. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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