Virus Posted October 12, 2006 Share Posted October 12, 2006 Working on a project for client in Rotherham in the UK. Some C&C would be appriciated. Software used: 3D max8, corel photopaint 12. I have added some new images I know they are not good enough but I am working on them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted October 12, 2006 Share Posted October 12, 2006 I think the lighting isn't too bad.but there's something about the building which makes it seem like its sliding off the top if the building it's on..or maybe its just at a weird angle or something.. overall not bad...keep it up man:cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Virus Posted October 13, 2006 Author Share Posted October 13, 2006 Working on a project for client in Rotherham in the UK. Some C&C would be appriciated. Software used: 3D max8, corel photopaint 12. I have added some new images I know they are not good enough but I am working on them.Thats the latest night image ! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
perspectiva3d Posted October 13, 2006 Share Posted October 13, 2006 Hellow, seems okey, but the roof border is too dark and i try to put more dark clouds in the left horizont back the building, the image is good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
leed Posted October 13, 2006 Share Posted October 13, 2006 Ok. I would lessen the AO a bit it makes it look grubby. is it ao, or are you using a soft shadow light rig, any case lessen the grubby : ) Have you got a vertical camera ( one that keeps lines vertical ) in Max. I would use that. and adjust the rest of the photograph images to match 1st image . make sure your verticals line up. and be a bit more careful with the masks in photoshop. try and match the grain of the pictures / images used in the composition, where is that tree, that is reflected in the glass? try and blend the people a bit better. 2nd image... good grief those people have been standing there a long time..... : ) needs a bit of work can you get down there and take some night time shots? 3rd image .....make sure your verticals line up. You have done a lot of cloning on the floor, I think you would get better results modeling and texturing a bit of floor to go in, and put a shaped plane in to cast some shadows. and loose the standard man on the right. try and match the colors, the light in the photos is yellow ish and the sun is coming from the other direction. 4th image. the building does look as if it is slipping off, and although the lower material is black I think you need to lighten it up a bit. You have bad photography to work from so it is going to be difficult to get good images out of them. If you can revisit the spot when it is sunny, or at least when it is not rainy that would give you a good base to work from. Hope that helps Lee Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Create an account or sign in to comment
You need to be a member in order to leave a comment
Create an account
Sign up for a new account in our community. It's easy!
Register a new accountSign in
Already have an account? Sign in here.
Sign In Now