RyanSpaulding Posted October 12, 2006 Share Posted October 12, 2006 Hey guys, I'm fixing up a marina renndering I did. Looking for CC. There's many issues I see...I'll be doing something different with the land area once I get the ocean and all that looking nice. I'm going to build docks for the yachts yet. Would coral be a nice touch perhaps? Any other ideas? More boats? Less? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bully712 Posted October 12, 2006 Share Posted October 12, 2006 Would coral be a nice touch perhaps? Any other ideas? More boats? Less? Coral would be a nice touch. You could add more boats. Maybe a few outside of the Marina. Other than the blue of the ocean, The image is lacking color. I know you probably want to focus on the Marina and not the surroundings. All that sand looking material on the right: Could u possible add some grass over there? And one last thing. Maybe changing the buildings to a different color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BrianKitts Posted October 12, 2006 Share Posted October 12, 2006 i would say lose the whale...... I just keep staring at it and forget what I'm looking at a rendering of.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanSpaulding Posted October 12, 2006 Author Share Posted October 12, 2006 Thanks for the early cc...appreciated. bully: I'll add more boats and do something to add variety in them too. Also, the sand material is concrete and the buildings are temporary. I'm actually going to be adding a bunch more life in there...trees, vegetation, more colorful buildings, ect. That'll be in one of my next versions. BKittsArc: Hmn, well, I may try and take the one surfacing out or submerge him more...maybe darken the texture so it just looks like a large mass underwater...not so detailed. I like the extra of having a whale. Keep em coming! Thanks guys. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ray Posted October 12, 2006 Share Posted October 12, 2006 I gotta say kill the whales, too. Otherwise very good start. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jafs00 Posted October 12, 2006 Share Posted October 12, 2006 I like the whales...Save the whales!!!! Save the WhaleS!!! SAVE THE WALES!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imgumbydammit Posted October 12, 2006 Share Posted October 12, 2006 Beyond the rest of the comments the yachts in the foreground look like they need piers/docks so you can get on the ships without a dinghy IGD PS..although distracting I thought the wales were a nice touch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manta Posted October 13, 2006 Share Posted October 13, 2006 I don't know if you're using a photo for reference, but here's one... http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.ctrivervalley.com/images-pictures-photos-of/Aerial-Photos-Pictures-CT/Connecticut-Marina-Photos/71A-Brewers-Marina-Boats.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.ctrivervalley.com/4-Connecticut-CT-in-of/Marinas-in-Connecticut-Boats/index.htm&h=751&w=1000&sz=210&hl=en&start=8&tbnid=-7skxQ90AS7SJM:&tbnh=112&tbnw=149&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dmarina%26svnum%3D10%26hl%3Den%26lr%3D%26safe%3Doff%26client%3Dfirefox-a%26rls%3Dorg.mozilla:en-US:official%26sa%3DN I think your water needs to be darker... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted October 13, 2006 Share Posted October 13, 2006 very nice start man,,I'm on the line here with the whales. Seems like a nice touch on the other hand kinda distracts me forom the scene.. Your lighting is ok and i think being that this image is in its' early stages i'll wait till you get some color and textures in...good luck man:cool: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted October 13, 2006 Share Posted October 13, 2006 very nice start man,,I'm on the line here with the whales. Seems like a nice touch on the other hand kinda distracts me forom the scene.. Your lighting is ok and i think being that this image is in its' early stages i'll wait till you get some color and textures in...good luck man:cool: some containers stored on the docks will be a nice touch IMO.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanSpaulding Posted October 13, 2006 Author Share Posted October 13, 2006 I don't know if you're using a photo for reference, but here's one... http://images.google.com/imgres?imgurl=http://www.ctrivervalley.com/images-pictures-photos-of/Aerial-Photos-Pictures-CT/Connecticut-Marina-Photos/71A-Brewers-Marina-Boats.jpg&imgrefurl=http://www.ctrivervalley.com/4-Connecticut-CT-in-of/Marinas-in-Connecticut-Boats/index.htm&h=751&w=1000&sz=210&hl=en&start=8&tbnid=-7skxQ90AS7SJM:&tbnh=112&tbnw=149&prev=/images%3Fq%3Dmarina%26svnum%3D10%26hl%3Den%26lr%3D%26safe%3Doff%26client%3Dfirefox-a%26rls%3Dorg.mozilla:en-US:official%26sa%3DN I think your water needs to be darker... This depends on if the company doing the marina is laying a dark sediment on the sea floor. I too asked this by seeing reference images but this is in the barbados so they are trying to keep the sea floor lighter. Thanks for the replies guys. Next version should be coming a bit soon. I'm thinking about spending a LOT of time on this one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
IC Posted October 13, 2006 Share Posted October 13, 2006 I really like the water. The boats are a bit uniform but it's the whale and dolphins that get all my attention. It looks like a wildlife shot rather than a visualisation. The whale's shadow(?) is a bit distracting too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RyanSpaulding Posted October 13, 2006 Author Share Posted October 13, 2006 I really like the water. The boats are a bit uniform but it's the whale and dolphins that get all my attention. It looks like a wildlife shot rather than a visualisation. The whale's shadow(?) is a bit distracting too. LOL. Yeah, I'm hearing people from renderosity also saying that could be a whale shadow. It is, in fact, another whale submerged. I'm going to do that to the 1st one and put them closer together. Dolphins may go...but they look nice in large format. I plan on modelling a bunch of coral and doing a lot of other touches. The boats I'll have to edit some textures in photoshop and reload them in Vue. I bought the Turbosquid yacht bundle and everything had the same textures. For the client, I had to get the image out. For me though, I do not. I also have to learn how to make convincing boat wakes in Vue/Photoshop and maybe I can find 3d people in appropriate beach/barbados wear. Poser perhaps? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
imgumbydammit Posted October 13, 2006 Share Posted October 13, 2006 Axyz has some beach people in their sport collection.Can't vouch for them myself for either close ups or ease of use but looks like it might be a possible option..less than $100 at that... http://www.axyz-design.com/ IGD Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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