Lief Schindler Posted May 7, 2003 Share Posted May 7, 2003 Please give some input on this house rendering. Its sort of NPR. Using MicroStation & Corel. I know it still needs work. Thanks, LS http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=test_5.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nisus Posted May 16, 2003 Share Posted May 16, 2003 no one? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
bigcahunak Posted May 16, 2003 Share Posted May 16, 2003 Hi, Nice image, makes me wanna put my swiming suit on. Nice white sand... The JPG compression and the size of the image are making it very hard to tell anything about the textures. I'd add some people there. It looks empty. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ferox Posted May 16, 2003 Share Posted May 16, 2003 it points to an attractive illustration (eg. some of the color toning), but less as a composition. phoenix palms don't just erupt from unconsolidated sand drifts. the compositional details (both minor and major) either support or detract from the render. especially the edges (hard or soft) where different scene objects overlap. the composition could become more alluring in its suggestion of a tropical idyll? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ernest Burden III Posted May 16, 2003 Share Posted May 16, 2003 the angle is awful. Its too much at 45 deg.s to the subject, and the plant block visual access to the porch. Try rotating one way or the other. Maybe pull back a bit to flatten the perspective. And color--more saturated colors for the house--it's the beach on a sunny day. There would be lots of color. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
KK Posted May 16, 2003 Share Posted May 16, 2003 It could use a little work, but I like it! BWT, this is my first post -- I have been lurking for a while, but have been very impressed by the quality of the work I've seen. Hope to be able to learn a lot from the pros here! KK Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dwright Posted May 17, 2003 Share Posted May 17, 2003 Light.. Way to pale, you don?t feel any warmth out of it, so play with lights. Heat can be visually expressed by contrast: between a yellowish/white light and bluish shadows, or the opposite. In addition, the darker regions are way to dark. I agree, I wish I could be in the Caribbean as I write this. David Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ernest Burden III Posted May 17, 2003 Share Posted May 17, 2003 I wish I could be in the Caribbean as I write this.David Ah, but you CAN be in the Caribbean, David. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ricardo Eloy Posted May 17, 2003 Share Posted May 17, 2003 Originally posted by Ernest Burden: Ah, but you CAN be in the Caribbean, David. [/QB]Yes! For as low as USD 3,999.99 you can experience the amazing beaches of Cancun! We accept all major credit cards. [] Rick Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
salty_dogs Posted May 17, 2003 Share Posted May 17, 2003 burden hit the nail on the head: add kolor. get saturated. actually, you've got some funny stuff happening with the flora, neon leaves and completely de-saturated trunk/stem/base things. your shadows also need color (try a complementary one.) as its been noted, tropics are super bright midday or shot late in the day when the sky/clouds are bustin with crazy red/orange/yellows. compositionaly, get some focus.(45/45 always sucks) if i were gonna buy this thing i'd want to see a better view of that porch where i'd be spending a lot of time drinking coronas and sipp'n gin and tonics in my hammock. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dwright Posted May 18, 2003 Share Posted May 18, 2003 LOL!! Actually.. I WILL go to the Caribbean during this summer using my AA Miles. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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