Warsaw Retail Park

[Hef]

Hi All,

 

Two of 4 images I've been working on for

a retail Park in Warsaw, Poland. I'd like some

honest suggestions on how to improve the images

especially suggestions on the background

which is supposed to be a cityscape

 

thanks

 

dave

 

http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=Warsaw_1.jpg

[salf]

In the first image the background doesnt quite fits with the render, specially the city lights part.

 

Oher than that, looks great.

[Wojciech Klepacki]

Hi,

Just out of curiosity: why someone from Ireland makes an images from Park in Warsaw?

rgds,

Wojciech Klepacki

[Hef]

yes, the background in the night-time render

dosen't work but I'm not sure what to do. I can

either add basic 3d buildings into the background

or an actual night-time cityscape/suburban photo.

Trouble is I can't find any good building material

mapping on the web (although I'll admit I haven't looked very hard), also finding a

photo for the background is next to impossible

 

Not sure why am Irish man is working on a Polish

job,but glad I am - it's a nice scheme. The Architect I'm working for gets quite a lot of foreign work from Russia & Eastern Europe

 

Thanks for your comments guys

 

Dave

[ShaunDon]

It looks as though your horizon line on the background image in the second rendering is too low -- the wispy vertical clouds look almost as if they're emanating from the ediface of the building.

 

You might try washing some color (easily done overall in post if you don't wanna re-render) from the background images over the render. The predominantly white lighting of the rendered section starkly contrasts your photo backdrops.

 

Looks like a fun project!

 

Cheers,

Shaun