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[evanmister]

here is a new scene I've been working on, concentrating mostly on lighting and getting a more natural feel. please give me your feed back on how i might make it better.

 

thank you.

[neko]

there are some good things going on here, but if you are looking for a more 'natural feel' then there are a few issues.....

 

your stone is very polished. i'm not sure about the bump mapping either - it looks as if the chair might tip over in the deep cracks. the plant looks a little unrealistic as well.

 

as far as composition goes, the chair is difficult to read against that colour of wall.

 

hope that helps

 

paul

[evanmister]

thanks for your feed back. how might you suggest to get a duller polished looked for the foor? or more realism in the plant?

 

thanks again.

[eksg]

umm...ok,it looks interesting,though there's no "life" on it.

 

try putting up more elements,add more texture, and enhance shadow quality.

 

umm....and try making a more dramatic shot,to give a feeling of realism,not just a still life.