Condos-Minneapolis

[Fernando Lino]

Hi Everyone.

This is the project where I am working on (design)... I did the renderings just are for Devepment Design.

 

Commentaries are welcome!!!

 

Modeling:

ADT 3.3

Rendering:

3ds Viz 4.2

finalRender Stage-1

Cars:

Lowpoligon 3d

Hardware:

Dual Opteron 2GB ram

Render Time:

high resolution (3000px) 40 min.

 

 

[RezMAN]

Nice model and an interesting design as well. I like it.

 

The sky doesn’t fit though. The focal point is off. On the second frame there are clouds at the horizon level.

 

Good start though.

[diablo]

Hi nice model, I like it, good job.

here are my coments.

-The background doesn't match is too light.-

-what kind of material are you using in the columns? it is too red

-The building is a little bit dark

-The grass looks like tile

-The street is dark

-The glass is flat,reflective and maybe needs a bump map

 

Good luck "suerte"

 

[ September 17, 2003, 07:45 PM: Message edited by: diablo ]

[Fernando Lino]

I know that I have to improve a lot this rendering

for this reason I posted it here (WIP)

 

Any way...I am still doing some modifications (design)

 

About this red color ..I don't know yet,...I only use for figure it out if the columns and the fireplace will use the same material.

 

:ebiggrin:

[bigcahunak]

Hi.

I liked the design style a lot. I didnt like the material change on an almost same surface. I marked in on the pic (hope its ok with u). I'd just leave it the same material like the rest of the wall, but thats me...

[David Barbarash]

Very nice work, I like the design alot, though I agree with bigcahunak with the material change from the brick to the sandstone (?). Maybe something like a brick bump out that acts as a shelf between the two would help? Oh well, just a suggestion. I would also like to see the building a littl livlier. Maybe some hanging baskets of flowers, a barbeque, a model in a bikini... something. THough they may detract from the image during the design concept change. The grass and sidewalks are both tiling, try something procedural instead. 2 different maps with a noise map to balance out any contrasts between the two should do the trick.

[Fernando Lino]

I really appreciate the commentaries

I agree Bigcahunak ….I need to modify this part, maybe raise the windows or use another material.

You are right David…the original idea is using planters on the fifth floor and more landscape work on the first floor (pedestrian scale).

 

Hey Diablo tienes alguna imagen con una apariencia mas real del vidrio?