blade911 Posted November 10, 2006 Share Posted November 10, 2006 hi everyone recently done proposal for a monument to come up here in the sultanate of oman ( a country in the middle east! ). the colours n mats arent final, somethin i jus came up with. modelled in cad. rest in max n vray do give c&c Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manta Posted November 11, 2006 Share Posted November 11, 2006 looks really good so far...there is something wrong though, and I can't put my finger on it...before I clicked on the thumbnail, I thought "holy s**t" but when it was enlarged, it did'nt look as great as I thought it would, but it does look good, don't get me wrong... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfured20 Posted November 15, 2006 Share Posted November 15, 2006 most of my critique goes with that third image - the windows look odd, maybe adding some more reflection would help. also, the trees in the background are too repetitive... i can see the same try has been copied or proxied around. try to add some variation. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted November 15, 2006 Share Posted November 15, 2006 your lighting is awefuly flat and dark. make it brighter and more contrasty. also your materials need work. they look plasticy as they stand. nice potential though, these could look superb when finished. i've taken the liberty of just fiddling with a few levels and contrasts to see the immediate difference. hope you dont mind. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blade911 Posted November 15, 2006 Author Share Posted November 15, 2006 thanks a lot u guys for ur advices.. great help to a beginner like me actually i did all tat modellin n renderin in a day so rushed up with things steve... thank u for enhancin my images. k i never seem to get the lighting rite. do u think i should work more in max or in post?? i usually keep only 1 target direct light as the source n nuttin else for exteriors.. wat do u recommend.. i have a final submission comn up for this project n wud really like to impress the clients. thanks again cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted November 15, 2006 Share Posted November 15, 2006 i think you should try to get the majority of your lighting nailed in max, and use photoshop for minor adjustments only. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
manta Posted November 15, 2006 Share Posted November 15, 2006 Run separate passes and bring them into PS, so you have more control over individual parts, i.e. shadows, reflections ect... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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