Executive Conference Room

[dabecker10]

Hi Everybody,

I've posted a couple of renderings of a conference room I modeled for one of the big wigs at my office. This is my first real attempt at using Brazil and all of my bosses were pleased with it (and I have many), but I want to "take it to the next level" so if you guys could take a few minutes and let me know what I can do to improve, I'd really appreciate it.

Thanks.

Oh yeah, it was modeled in Max 6, rendered in Brazil 1.2, and took about 6 hours to render between a few machines.

 

http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=FinalRenderBorderEast_small.jpg

http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=FinalRenderBorderWest_small_1.jpg

[salf]

Looks pretty good, only things Ill tweak are the backgrounds.

 

1- in the first image, outside the conference room door, all we see right now is a white wall and a corner, you could add some paints hanging in the wall, plants or rpc people walking, something like that.

 

2- same goes for the second pic, outside the window, that clear sky makes you think that your conference room is on the 112th floor on some skyscrapper, in the middle of the countryside, If i were you Ill add a bacground with city buildings (skyscrappers) or maybe change the sky.

 

[ February 27, 2004, 01:18 PM: Message edited by: salf ]

[kingeldar]

just a small detail

 

in image 2 painting frame got only 3 different colors

i mean the upper part is full shaded but just under the partially lighted part is almost same color... looks strange shoulmd be a little brighter i guess...

 

i like much image 1 taht looks terrific

 

& i agree with sky issue....

but that looks good!