wip ext apartments

[spanish pants]

Greetings everyone, here is my latest work in progress.

Modeled and rendered in 3d studio, using scanline renderer. it took about 18 minutes to to render. The image is just a rough photoshop for now.

I'd greately appreciate your comments especially on the lighting and camera.

 

thanks

[STRAT]

comming on alright

 

initially i'd lessen the impact on that branch. it's too big, blurry and distracting, and secondly i'd remove all reflection from the ground the building's sitting on.

[TheAllusionisst]

Kind of has a unique warm sepia feel to it, including STRAT's comments, if the one person had warmer browns and grey clothing, they wouldn't stand out and the image would be real harmonious. Nice work!

[spanish pants]

Thanks for the comments guys. Here's the updated version, though now i'm not happy with the lighting/color on the rear building.

Do you think i should desaturate the color from the light? or any other comments?

 

Thanks

[martin walker]

its looking really nice, I think a bit of cast shadow on the rear building may help...overall its got a very nice "summer evening" feel to it

[spanish pants]

its looking really nice, I think a bit of cast shadow on the rear building may help...overall its got a very nice "summer evening" feel to it

 

Hello Martin, thanks for the critique. What do you suggest for the shadows?