chutti Posted December 2, 2006 Share Posted December 2, 2006 Need your comments to make it better....Max-Vray-PScs. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mfured20 Posted December 3, 2006 Share Posted December 3, 2006 looks good, my biggest crit is just a compositional one... i find it confusing how the angle of the windows and the shadows directly align on the columns and back wall; i just find it distracting. a slight shift of the camera would break that strong diagonal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zeilveen Posted December 4, 2006 Share Posted December 4, 2006 Hello mate, Looks very nice thats my first impression, there is nothing really wrong with it and I would be very happy with this picture. The only thing that my eye didnt like was the guy sitting next to the collumn, he looks half dead ;-) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
carlangas Posted December 5, 2006 Share Posted December 5, 2006 Hi Chutti, Nice render, I hope you don't mind but I photoshoped your render. just adjusted colors and brightness. I thinks it looks a little better. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lafiera Posted December 5, 2006 Share Posted December 5, 2006 i like the picture, and yet i think the guy next to the column is already a zombie, i just wish to see it (for the purpose of photografic impact), with the light coming toward the camera and placing a vray area light on the ceiling window to give a more dramatic cinematic experience, some ies lights on the brick wall for ilumination now that this wall will be in shadow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chutti Posted December 5, 2006 Author Share Posted December 5, 2006 thanks guys..yup that guy looks a dead guy i've tried to replace the face with PS but its difficult to match...nice color correction with a soft light effect i like it. thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
martin walker Posted December 5, 2006 Share Posted December 5, 2006 very nice , main thing that struck me was the grain on the timber uprights...seems to be running the wrong way. ...now give me your Ibanez PGM Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NOOXY Posted December 5, 2006 Share Posted December 5, 2006 very nice man..i think the composition looks good and lighting and textuing seems ok..only thing that stood out for me was the man on the chair:D Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
chutti Posted December 6, 2006 Author Share Posted December 6, 2006 very nice , main thing that struck me was the grain on the timber uprights...seems to be running the wrong way. ...now give me your Ibanez PGM yup u r r8 ....thats done wrongly in PS...u can tke my PGM if u want...i am gonna buy the IBANEZ prestige 2620. thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Brian Cassil Posted December 6, 2006 Share Posted December 6, 2006 Nice image. I like the brighter version but I hate the peeps all together. Just get rid of them. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Juan Altieri Posted December 6, 2006 Share Posted December 6, 2006 great pic, but i agree with most, the onlu critic is about the man on the chair, looks like taken from "psicossis" movie... keep posing. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Koper Posted December 6, 2006 Share Posted December 6, 2006 im not gonna say anything more about the pilar guy... darn! the only thing that i dont realy like is that you cut of that name on the back wall,, could you maybe move it down a notch so that it is more visible. also think of putting a color glow behind it so that it pops a litle bit, just a tit bit? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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