vray interior help......

[lafiera]

this an interior i'm working on, and i have seen the previews so many times that i think i miss something on the way, and could'nt find the right atmotsphere, maybe the lightning or is something else

please give a hand to a felow

acad, max8,vray 1.5

[ttzol]

my friend , although this is a really good render , speaking in absolute measures , i believe that is exactly what the problem is . Everything looks

TOO neat clean and tidy , that the end result is kind of expected and somewhat boring . Try adding some noise now and then and also look again at those exterior rails , they look odd , finally the light on the top is nice but seems useless , turn it off or make it a part of your scenery

[Juan Altieri]

try to increase the light multiplers, and add a colour to sunlight and another different to the vraylight...

[Zeilveen]

Render is good, very nice quality and sharp enough. I would recommend to play with the composition a little and maybe add an extra light source left of the camera.

 

In the scene scale down the red flowers, they are attracting all the attention and blocking the view to the rear. Also this black rack next to the door, just delete it and put a nice friendly painting on that wall.

 

Just some things that crossed my mind when looking at it.

 

Good luck,

 

Ronald

[eksg]

In the scene scale down the red flowers, they are attracting all the attention and blocking the view to the rear. Also this black rack next to the door, just delete it and put a nice friendly painting on that wall.

 

He's right about those things, there is something wrong with the overall composition of the room.I would suggest that instead of that black rack on the side of the wall,you can put a console table with a few items on it with a nice painting on the wall.but of course you should straighten the wall(if you are allowed to alter the design just to hide the column).Your ceiling is not feasible(trust me,im a contractor,i know,hehe)make it a bit deeper,just to make room for your pelmet boxing(that is your curtain box im refering too), because it seems that your curtains were stuck somewhere on the ceiling.And if your going to put covelighting on it,it should be recessed up to make room for the light and a hand to fit in for maintenance.The painting on that column behind the dining table needs more thickness,and try using a nicer painting other than that.your counter table top is too thin,it should be at least 25 mm thick with under support.u can also put a pair of bar stool there.your rangehood goes directly to your ceiling,its ok,but its producing a shadow that it means there's a gap in between,try fixing that one.try changing the flower vase on top of the dining table,put a lower one,and maybe you would like considering to put some plates and utensils.same thing with the vase at your center table,put a lower one.Is that a sliding door going to the terrace,u can try putting a door handle.pardon me on this comments,i love the rendering,it is well done.u just have to work out on your interior composition.I dont know if your also the designer or if you were just appointed to do the presentation, but i hope you would consider my suggestions.I would like to see the revised one if you have the time to make it and post it here.ciao and God bless.

[3dSol]

niiiice render

but 2 things are catching my eye:

 

the roses are too big

and there's a reflection on that lamp that's kind of dizzy

 

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3dsol