lafiera Posted December 21, 2006 Share Posted December 21, 2006 this is a project i'm working on, and is getting close the deadline for finish, so any c&c are wellcome Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
d.sign Posted January 7, 2007 Share Posted January 7, 2007 Very nice and clean! Two suggestions - a bit more dynamic camera angle (this one look almost like orthographic projection) and bit more reflection in the glass, try to get some clouds to reflect... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lewis Posted January 8, 2007 Share Posted January 8, 2007 Yes it looks very nice. I'd also sugges to make glass little darker when you make it more refelctive as d.sign suggested. cheers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
stylEmon Posted January 8, 2007 Share Posted January 8, 2007 good suggestions, great work Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted January 8, 2007 Share Posted January 8, 2007 Nice work. My pet peeve in Architectural work is that the walls must be at right angles to the floor. Like a belows in a 4x5 camera work on getting the parallax corrected, your far exterior walls are sloped inward towards the top of the imaage. I'm not sure if it's entirely possible from the angle you have. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hockley91 Posted January 8, 2007 Share Posted January 8, 2007 I like that warped effect the cameras give. It looks more realistic and kind of exaggerates height with the viewer's perspective. I think the image looks perfect for my taste. The only thing I would do would take out the people from the balcony. The building looks very clean already and I don't think the people are helping on the balcony. In fact, they look like they are arguing....hmmmm. kidding of course. I don't think you necessarily need any clouds in the image. It's obviously a cloudless day in this image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Horhe Posted January 9, 2007 Share Posted January 9, 2007 Hmm, dont like th vegetation in the foreground - its a bit to pixelated - perphaps you should get some higher resolution images for your library - try surfing the web you can get plenty for free. Another thing about the vegetation - try to brightness/contrast the palms and plants their a bit to pale and foggy (specially the palm on the left) - maybe a bit more saturation and photo filter effect to the hole image (try sepia 25%) under photoshop (probably CS2) - but that would give you a more warmer render and i gues thats just a matter of personal taste Overall nice image. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
innerdream Posted January 9, 2007 Share Posted January 9, 2007 I like that warped effect the cameras give. It looks more realistic and kind of exaggerates height with the viewer's perspective. I think the image looks perfect for my taste. The only thing I would do would take out the people from the balcony. The building looks very clean already and I don't think the people are helping on the balcony. In fact, they look like they are arguing....hmmmm. kidding of course. I don't think you necessarily need any clouds in the image. It's obviously a cloudless day in this image. I'm kind of old school - take a look at Julius Schulman Architectural photos for an example. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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