Penthouse

[vgalov]

This is a penthouse I've been working lately.

Actually it is my second or third posting and I am interested to see if you find any development in my work. My first apartment after a long list of single family houses in Art*lantis and lately in Cinema4D. Modeled in ArchiCAD and rendered in C4D.

38 min. for image size 1200/900 with GI solution time included.

 

Thank you in advance.

Viktor

[skogskalle]

hey!

 

great pics!

 

The floor in the first pic seems a bit too reflective, like it was covered in thin glass or something, which (IMO) takes away some of the realism. BUT on the other hand, it makes it look really sweet so its really not a problem. Depends on what youre trying to make here. If youre going for realism, try reducing it a little, but if youre just trying to make cool pics for selling the apartment - I would keep it just the way it is

 

its hard to spot any flaws... but a few minor things maybe...

on the second pic, the cieling (spelling) has a highlight that I dont understand. But maybe its some detail like a lowered ceiling that I dont see. Hope you know what Im looking at (im not very good at explaning things in english)...

 

and the sun that shines on the floor has somewhat jagged edges in both pics.

 

These are just minor stuff as I said. overall really neat images!

[demo38]

Just some observations imho...

 

The sunlight seems too intense for as gloomy as the cityscape is...

 

You may want to use a different wood texture as well, the waves are a bit distracting in this one.

 

The wheels on the small table are squashed?

 

The vases on the table seem too illuminated.

 

Keep it up, they are coming along well.