Vaddon Posted October 12, 2002 Share Posted October 12, 2002 Tell me your opinion! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tony Posted October 12, 2002 Share Posted October 12, 2002 Very nice job on the modeling. There a couple things that caught my eye. The sky just does not fit the lighting for the house. It is much to dark and looks like it's pasted on a flat vertical plane behind the house. The water in the pool is also two different colors. The design is very nice and the overall lighting is good, but it lacks contrast. With a few changes this would be a beautiful building. Very nice. [ October 12, 2002, 11:27 AM: Message edited by: Tony Richardson ] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RuiRibeiro Posted October 13, 2002 Share Posted October 13, 2002 Hi, I like very much the building architecture, but maybe you could put a map in the background not so dark as this one, it´s with too much contrast. I would like to see the water on the left like the water on the right side. Could the difference be on the shadow on the right? Continue the good work. C u, RuiRibeiro Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vaddon Posted October 13, 2002 Author Share Posted October 13, 2002 Well, thanks! It is not finished work.I'll made this render to see, how it would be looks like : ) I plan to post some works in interior design later Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
nisus Posted October 14, 2002 Share Posted October 14, 2002 Ow dear... sky.jpg or sky.bmp... lol! Get rid of that sky and it'll look much better and more solid! The water to the right looks fine (photo?) but the water to the left is a bit flat and artificial (doesn't look like water at all...) Modeling is basic but ok. Looking forward for an upgrade rgds nisus Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sawyer Posted October 14, 2002 Share Posted October 14, 2002 I really like the desing but I think that aside from what has been said before I would like to see different camera angle. I am not sure what is going on on the sides of the screen. Is that a driveway behind the water by the car? Are those steps on the left side? Anyway I would like to see it again with a bit more clarity as to site conditions. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted October 15, 2002 Share Posted October 15, 2002 desparately needs an up-grade. i know it still WIP, but - modelling is fine, but it's sooooooooo clinical and clean it hurts re-vamp the lighting - give it some contrast, atmosphere, depth to the shadows, LIFE!!! textures - try not to make them look obviously wall papered in, like the stone texture underneath that flange at the bottom of the pic. the water on the l/h side is all screwy. make it like the r/h side water, which looks decent. stair case needs finishing. skyhooks are very convinient but look kinda strange sky - change the sky whatever you do i'd take out the car too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Vaddon Posted October 19, 2002 Author Share Posted October 19, 2002 interior of this building web page Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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