Internal Animation

[martin walker]

http://www.divshare.com/download/43930-86d

 

Hi Guys

 

First pass animation which will eventually be a DVD. Im waiting on finishes from client before I can do the final rendering.

 

All C&C welcome

 

cheers

[jophus14]

Nice start. Switch the painting that you have either in the the bedroom or the living room. Most people wouldn't put the same artwork in two rooms, especially if it's expensive artwork. It seems as thought the rooms should have some color on the walls as well. I think this will give the rooms a different feel as you are seeing them appear in the animation. This is just my two cents.

[martin walker]

thanks Joseph. Im waiting for walls colours from the client...and artwork hence the copies !

[neil poppleton]

Needs more life i.e. furniture / accessories / rugs ? something, just a little bland at the minute.

 

Maybe wall colour may help as suggested.

[neil poppleton]

Also where is the f*%k off big plasma tv , that everyone but i own...........

[mtutaj]

what kind of camera are you using, its kind of wierd that the openings, seem to get narrower as you pan around. otherwise looks pretty good.

[martin walker]

its a massive 90 degrees fov, so probably causing the distortion

[martin walker]

Needs more life i.e. furniture / accessories / rugs ? something, just a little bland at the minute.

 

Maybe wall colour may help as suggested.

 

 

yeah, fair point. I'll re-post it once client has made his mind up and I can get all finishes in

[guitarmunkee]

Everything has been moentioned already. But from what I can see, you need to res that egg chair up. It looks a little choppy, maybe a turbosmooth mod or something? Other then that the rooms look a little empty but some more props. Lighting looks good though.