while in the hospital

[eksg]

Hi guys!yesterday, i went to the hospital before going to work cause i collapsed the night before.hehe.actually,i didnt know that i have this "hypoglycemia" wherein my body doesnt have enough sugar to produce energy.

 

anyway,that is just a segway.i was in the examintaion room,and while waiting for the lab result,i made this.just wanna hear your comment.im having this doubt that it looks realistic.and most of my work looks like this.can anyone tell me whats wrong with my work.is it the lighting?or the composition?thanks!

[Horhe]

Sorry to hear about the hypoglycemia :/

 

I have a couple of comments:

 

1. There is noise on the celing - increase your irr settings

2. The floor tile is a little to big, and the material looks cheapish... make it more pale (cover the floor with your hand - looks a lot better) or better yet change for some thing else.

3. The lamp is hanging too low - unless the owner intends to bang his head to stress out a little.

4. Probably the whole room is illuminated a tad too evenly. Make a little variation.

5. The illumination of the furniture on the left is wierd, unrealistic... and there are no handles on the drawers. Same goes for the cabinet behind the glass.

6. Produce a different view - more natural - from a different angle - or tilt the camera a bit co you dont get the sofas and the border of the image parralel.

7. The glass material is looking unrealistic - its too see through with less or no reflection at all.

 

I like the IES lights.

 

Cheers

[Jeremy]

It's looking good.

Just some suggestions:

 

1. Bricks in the back room look too big

2. Adding some small variation in the light boxes (light color and intensity...slight variation)

3. The photometric lights look to be hitting the wall at the same angle while the fixtures are at the same angles. Try changing these up a bit

4. Add some noise (wrinkles, depressions, etc.) in the couches.

5. The floor boards also look too large and the grain seems distractingly prominent.

 

Hope you're feeling better.

[Jeremy]

It's looking good.

Just some suggestions:

 

1. Bricks in the back room look too big

2. Adding some small variation in the light boxes (light color and intensity...slight variation)

3. The photometric lights look to be hitting the wall at the same angle while the fixtures are at the same angles. Try changing these up a bit

4. Add some noise (wrinkles, depressions, etc.) in the couches.

5. The floor boards also look too large and the grain seems distractingly prominent.

 

Hope you're feeling better.

[pipjor]

"i was in the examintaion room,and while waiting for the lab result,i made this"

 

 

dude am i reading this right, did you bring a laptop to the emergency room to do work???

[eksg]

Thanks guys for the comments.

 

Mr Pipjor,it just happens that before i got to the office, i went first to the hospital for checkup.well...its not really work,i didnt expect that it would take me half a day at the hospital,that i even have to not to go to work.am just bored coz i have to wait for a long time for the result to come.so i started to do this,just for the heck of enhancing my rendering skills and to kill time.

 

Mr horhe,thanks for the advise.i'll take note on everything you said.as for the lamp,its just a ready made model that i merge with the scene,and it really goes like that in real life.(we got one in the office,got an imitation from china for $120,hehe).the cabinets have handles,but the material have very high reflectance,it doesnt appear at all,my fault,have to change that one.i have a different camera angle for this one.but i posted this one coz it hides almost most of the lacking details.hehe.

 

This is not the final image,i made this roughly for about 1.5 hours.i'll post the revised one soon.

 

thanks guys for all the comments,ill take everything into consideration.

 

ciao!