warm/cold light interior.

[CORRENTES]

Something that i'm doing.

 

ALready know that i have to give more detail in the window frame and better material on couch

[eksg]

Something that i'm doing.

 

ALready know that i have to give more detail in the window frame and better material on couch

 

umm...i think you should put more detail on the window frame and a better material for your couch....hehehe.

 

i think it's ok,but it would look better if you'll put more details.my comment woud be on the background.try lowering the contrast,and i think you put it on a straight plane.if im right,try making your background on a curve object,this will give depth and some realism.okie!

[clum03]

I agree with eksg that there needs to be more details in the window frames. I know its suppose to be clean and modern but the frame looks almost painted on.

Also, I agree that the background image to help distinguish background and foreground. Right now the background looks really flat. Fix those and you got a nicely lit room.

[STRAT]

it's comming on nicely, but needs more attention to the lighting (i dont agree the frames need more work personally) -

 

 

look where i've put red squares around. on the right one under the shelf you have a stark contrast where you have a strong shadow on the floor, but nothing on the wall. the wall under there would be in shadow too.

 

and the red box on the left - again, there should be a shadow being cast off that large window frame onto the floor.

[CORRENTES]

Thank you all for the crits.

I have one question STRAT:

I completely agree about your repairs. The shadow cast from the window frame should be easy to fix, maybe changing the direct light position

but the other shadow, i´m out of ideas how to fix.

And for me, the light is one of the must important things (architecture student)

cya

[ApeiNe]

Nice work

 

I think you should better try to make the shadow more smooth, more "area" shadow. Also add some details to the scene.

Keep up the good work