whale Posted February 6, 2007 Share Posted February 6, 2007 HI GUYS, THIS BUILDING IS NOT EVEN 20% COMPLETE AT ALL... I JUST WHAT TO HERE YOUR OPINIONS ABOUT THE WHOLE STRUCTURE... I ATTACHED BOTH THE FRONT AND BACK VIEWS...THANKS... BY THE WAY I AM HAVING A PROBLEM WITH MY V.RAY, IT KEEPS ON SAYING SOMTHING ABOUT A LICENCE OF SOME SORT.. SO I CANT RENDER ANY OF MY DESIGNS WITH IT... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whale Posted February 16, 2007 Author Share Posted February 16, 2007 this is the update... pls i need your opinions?> 3dmax+vray+photoshop Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
anindia Posted February 16, 2007 Share Posted February 16, 2007 dear wale, i think u have some problem with ur vray settings.this is a day scene, so there will be more sharp shadows on the surfaces to keep a similarity between building surface shadows and car-human figure shadows.you should be more careful in texturing. on the wall just below the windows some grey patches are coming. try to avoid them. your perspective points are also litle confusing - may be because of the sky you have used in your back ground. try to adjust the tiling in your road texture. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aaron2004 Posted February 16, 2007 Share Posted February 16, 2007 The first thing that I noticed is that the man in your picture is goose-stepping. The lighting is pretty good. I would try and tackle your textures first. They look kind of cartoonish. Your on the right track, though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alfienoakes Posted February 16, 2007 Share Posted February 16, 2007 Textures.... textures.... They really need looking at. The tiles are way too bright, and there are a few tiling issues. At the moment, the whole image is really unbalanced. The sky is too over bearing, and the resolutions between the background, the foreground and the model, just dont match.. Also, get the Vray issue sorted out, as that is not helping your task here.. I like the "huggy bear" car though.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
whale Posted February 17, 2007 Author Share Posted February 17, 2007 thanks for your opinions... i think i would still have to work on the tilings and lightnings..... by the way i attached the back view,.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
STRAT Posted February 17, 2007 Share Posted February 17, 2007 remove those footballers. silly things like that ruin pictures. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
alfienoakes Posted February 20, 2007 Share Posted February 20, 2007 remove those footballers. silly things like that ruin pictures. Especially when its Wayne Bridge and Damian Duff..!! A couple of first teamers at least... I would wouldnt want reserves playing on my development... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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