Joel Posted May 6, 2003 Share Posted May 6, 2003 Here is something I'v been working on durring my lunch break. Still needs some work. Looking for some honest critiques. Thanks. http://www.frontviewdesign.com/br6.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
andymcnair Posted May 7, 2003 Share Posted May 7, 2003 its looking pretty good. What software are you using? From the artifacts around the sink and the far wall i'm guessing Finalrender - if so you'll need to increase your values. (its been the bane of my life recently) What is the red texture? it seems a little too shiny / bumpy, almost wet looking. The lights above the sink seem to be glowing a lot brighter than they're illuminating, maybe cut down the self ilumination or increase the light intensity. Looking forward to an update. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Craig Ramsay Posted May 7, 2003 Share Posted May 7, 2003 Good modeling and nice textures! I agree with Andy's points also ingrease your antialiasing to get rid of the jaggies. I think the lighting needs more work, to me it just doesn't look realistic. Maybe add a fiew more light bounces and reduce the intensity of the light down the hall... is it daylight or artificial? Good start Craig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Craig Ramsay Posted May 7, 2003 Share Posted May 7, 2003 Andy do you have any idea where Iain is today? I tried to get him at the office but I can't get him on the phone. Craig Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joel Posted May 7, 2003 Author Share Posted May 7, 2003 Andy: Thanks for your feedback. Yes, I am using Final Render. I only used 50RH rays for this test. The red walls were supposed to be gloss paint, I'll have to work on that some more. Craig: Thank you for your feedback. I was going for natural light, but for this image I think I'm going to switch to artificial, I have a more updated rendering that reflects that change. Thanks guys. Joel Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
siliconbauhaus Posted May 7, 2003 Share Posted May 7, 2003 50 rh sounds too low to me...what are your other settings? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Crazy Homeless Guy Posted May 7, 2003 Share Posted May 7, 2003 Are the soap disspenser the same material as the shelf they are sitting on? It would really add interest to the image if you put water with a few bubbles on top in the bathtub. That is probably not what the image is about, but it would definetly make the image feel like someone was using the space. Maybe make the floor look slightly worn in front of the sink, and down the hall. Also, something seems a little odd about the marble around the tub. Maybe to smooth? ...not sure. From the reflection it looks like it should be bumpy, but the image map looks smooth. ts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joel Posted May 8, 2003 Author Share Posted May 8, 2003 Here is the latest update to the bathroom. I switched to artificial light, made some changes according to some of the comments I received. Thinking about making 2 compositions out of this model: 1 focus on the tub, 2 focus on the sink. Thanks for your comments. Joel http://www.frontviewdesign.com/br7.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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