apartment exterior

[prashanth]

Hi,

 

This is a shot of the apartment which am currently working on....am using maya8..mr 3.5 is great...critiques welcome

[kippu]

nice shot ... good going prasanth...how abt the whole bldg?

[monkhell]

How about plants to give life to the shot and maybe another material for the beams

[prashanth]

A small improvement from the previous one . i am working on the plants,will upload it asap.

[ApeiNe]

Nice shot.

 

Yes, finally, MR got a physical Sun/Sky system wich is great

[prashanth]

thtz really great....MR is too good now. but there are still a lot to learn in MR!! I tried adding some life to it....

[ApeiNe]

really nice

Why dont put your sun on the left side of the scene, it must add some lighting on your building wich is actually really dark

[missoni]

I do not like the pic very much... It's dark, no shadows, texturing's been done quickly, not precisely => textures are badly set... boring, camera too much lowered... It's of course TOO MUCH OF CRITIX, but y would you ask my opinion to be praised??

G'luck to u, hope to see updates!

[Horhe]

I do not like the pic very much... It's dark, no shadows, texturing's been done quickly, not precisely => textures are badly set... boring, camera too much lowered... It's of course TOO MUCH OF CRITIX, but y would you ask my opinion to be praised??

G'luck to u, hope to see updates!

 

 

Heh your a little too harsh there. As you can see this is in the ^work in progress^ thread so there will be many updates for sure.

Textures? As far as we know this is a raw massing of the project. So we really cant comment on the textures apart from one wall which is fine in my opinion. Camera angle? I suppose its just a preview of the object once again - and lighting mood.

 

I like the camera shot in the second render - maybe adding a panorama of a city or some buildings in the backdrop might do the trick, or some vegetation. I like the way that the sun is glancing from behing the building.

Nice lighting keep it up.

 

Cheers

Cheers

[missoni]

Yeah, u're right, Horhe! I've tried tooooo much to critisize as much as possible! )) But i suppose, better comment early, than later )) So that the next render would include my critix as well )) Yeah, but u're right, i'll try and keep on less critix, if that was tooo rude of me )) Sorry! ))

[Horhe]

Yeah, u're right, Horhe! I've tried tooooo much to critisize as much as possible! )) But i suppose, better comment early, than later )) So that the next render would include my critix as well )) Yeah, but u're right, i'll try and keep on less critix, if that was tooo rude of me )) Sorry! ))

 

It wasnt rude of you, its just that in my opinion this is still an early stage to criticise on those areas that you did.