ottoatom Posted February 11, 2007 Share Posted February 11, 2007 Hello.. I have this job to send out asap, and could be considered as finished, but I'm still not happy with it. I dont really know where else I could improve my images, so I'm in need of more mature eyes.. I hope you can help me! Made with 3dsmax, vray for rendering and photoshop in compositing. Thx! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mbayana Posted February 11, 2007 Share Posted February 11, 2007 Hi Romain I think if you adjust camera position slightly in the first pic becuase it seem (to me) with no subject, and you need to show your biulding as the main subject of the camera you catch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
neko Posted February 11, 2007 Share Posted February 11, 2007 definitely change the camera for the first image (the second image is very good) the tree is obscuring the top level of the building and you are showing too much foreground. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TheAllusionisst Posted February 11, 2007 Share Posted February 11, 2007 I agree that the POV of the first shot crops to much of the building and focuses on the people, kind of looks more like a 'lifestyle' image rather than architectural visualization. Nice work, just seems the POV of the first one loses focus on what the image is suppose to be about. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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