night render

[supaslims]

Hi all

 

This is a personal project i've been working on for a while which im planning on including in my portolio...this is a strait render out of LW (no post work yet) and id like some suggestions before going ahead with post work.

 

I know they're are some obvious probs with shadows and that annoying blue reflection to the left...but il take care of them

 

 

modeled & rendered in Lightwave, no radiosity, just RT...to much transparency for it i think orangecry

 

Cheers

[Ernest Burden III]

modeled & rendered in Lightwave, no radiosity, just RT...to much transparency for it i think

Better try Lightscape, then! Just kidding.

 

It's a nice image but too even overall-find a way to create interest in an area of the picture--perhaps more stuff going on inside a portion of the building, perhaps people grouped around some outdoor artpiece, spilling out of a gallery or party (it is nighttime). The perspective is too centered in the elevation. I would suggest going up or down to about 1/3 of the height of the building. If it were me, I would lower the eyeheight. Speaking of horizon, you have some mountain shapes that are well below where they would really be.

[supaslims]

Thanks Ernest

 

Thanks for spotting the issue with the horizon, that got completely past me.

 

The render is taken from another section of the building but point taken!

 

And I was thinking about people in dinner/formal wear...hmmmm, you know where i can get a nice model of a limo? :ngelaugh:

 

thanks again