Kitchen

[ciberarte]

Hi!

This is a practice , and I want to make this scene as real asposible, please shoot yours comments.

 

THANKS

 

http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=COCINA2dbcopy_1.jpg

[Francois]

Hola. Muy bonito.

 

The kitchen seems very nice, but it seems the camera is at waist height. Get the view from standing person's perspective. It will help get a better view of the counter and what is behind it. Keep on the good work

 

Francois

[ciberarte]

Bon jour, Francois

Thanks for the comment, i will try the camera move, but actually i want to improve the realism in texture and ilumination. Now it does not look like a real picture :onfusedw: , what is the detail that is making it unreal?.

 

 

Merci beaucoup,

 

au revoir.

[Diego Rosales]

Hey Arnaldo!

 

Nice image! I really like the overall atmosphere. Some things I would change:

 

1. Make sure the camera and target are in the same height so as to avoid parallax (3-point perspective). Keep the camera on eye-level, or at least not facing the edge of the countertop.

2. Use a radial falloff for the spots (modify panel > light cone rollout > falloff) in order to soften the bright circles projected on the floor.

3. The space is being lit too evenly. Try darkening the entrance a bit, in order to "see" the spotlights working and also for some contrast.

Judging by the angle of the sun, I would give a hint of red to your exterior light and a more artificial halogen-type color for the spots.

4. The width of the stool tubes seem to be way too thin, as if they were going to break when I sit.

5. If you're looking for realism, I would change the reflections on the door either by giving a bit of glossiness or a soft bump.

6. The way the painting and the rug are chopped by the camera makes my eye go straight out of the composition. Reframe your camera so as to avoid this.

 

I don't know what software setup you're using, but you could also try a different exposure setting. Could you post your software specs?

 

Best,

 

/Diego

[ciberarte]

Thanks for the comments!!

 

i have just made this image with some changes...

 

same point of view: http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=COCINA2Fbu.jpg

diferent point of view:

http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=COCINA2G.jpg

 

...please shoot in order to improve the realism.

 

[ September 23, 2003, 06:25 AM: Message edited by: ciberarte ]

[ciberarte]

comments please

http://www.cgarchitect.com/forum/filepush.asp?file=COCINAh3gdedenochebuprueba2.jpg

[Ricardo Eloy]

Hi!

I've been out for a while, so I just saw this now.

I think your image lacks a bit of contrast. The areas where light bounces are as lit as the areas receiving direct light. Maybe you should work on that.

Also, the night shot looks odd because of lighting. You see, it's dark, even in those areas right under the bulbs. We shouldn't be able to see de moonlight coming thru the window, either (assuming you have such a strong light source inside).

Ah, btw, those stools look too reflective, imho. Maybe decreasing their reflection would help (just a thought).

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Rick